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广州家教中心:高一英语写作能力训练


来源:广州家教中心 日期:2018/12/6
第一节:短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符(/\),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:原行没有错的不要改。
Dear David,
I can understand what you feel.When I was young,      76._____
I had the same experience as you do,                         
and after I talked with my parents heart                77. _____
to heart,we had better understanding of each other. So try to 78._____
communicate with your parents often let them know that        79._____
study, and play are all important. You are wise enough      80._____
to deal with your own business well.Don’t you think that      81._____
all parents in the world love their children as if                82.______
they are sometimes strictly and seriously? I’m sure that your parents 83.______
will trust you and you will enjoy a little of more freedom.      84._______
I hope my advices is of some help to you.                    85._______
                                   Yours
                                 Linda 
 
 
 
 
第二节   书面表达(满分25分)(2008年全国卷I)
假定你是李华,从小喜爱大熊猫(panda),一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信:
1.我介绍;
2.祝贺苏琳生日;
3.感谢工作人员;
4.索取苏琳三岁生日照。
 
注意:1.词数100左右;
      2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头语已为你写好。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Greetings from China!
 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
 
                                                                              Yours truly,
                                                                                 Li Hua
 
参考答案:
76. what改为 how。77. and改为but。78. had后加a。79. let前加to。80. all改为both。81. √ 
82. as改为even。83. strictly改为strict。
84. 去掉 of。 a little修饰的是形容词的比较级more,所以要用a little,表示程度。
85.advices改为advice。
 
书面表达
One Possible Version
Dear Sir/ Madam,
Greetings from Chian!
I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was glad to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website.Now she’s going to be there. I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work.
   By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.
                                                                                   Yours truly,
                                                                                     Li Hua
 

 

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